Where does Bond go after Craig?

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    I daresay most of us here recall Aristotle's Poetics. Not for a second would I consider M a robot if he or she did not get crossways with Bond. Obviously the conflicts occur elsewhere within the story.





  • talos7talos7 New Orleans
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    CrabKey wrote: »
    I daresay most of us here recall Aristotle's Poetics. Not for a second would I consider M a robot if he or she did not get crossways with Bond. Obviously the conflicts occur elsewhere within the story.

    Robot? No, it is universally a given that within a supervisor/ subordinate relationship there will be some instances of conflict

    Now, to what extent they decide to lean into that will be interesting.



  • sandbagger1sandbagger1 Sussex
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    007HallY wrote: »
    QBranch wrote: »
    007HallY wrote: »
    A good starting point would legitimately be M sending Bond on some sort of off the books mission for personal reasons. It doesn't have to necessarily be a direct adaptation of MR though.
    I like the examples you've provided following that paragraph. Are you familiar with Solstice, the Dynamite comic short story? It's my favourite of the comics thus far, and sees M sending Bond on an off-the-books mission to assassinate a man (former FSB) who is romantically involved with a relative of an MI6 employee. M believes the man is trying to use the relative as leverage to compromise the MI6 worker. Initially, Bond brushes off the task as something domestic, but accepts the mission upon seeing the photo of the relative...
    (Bond realizes the relative is M's daughter)

    I envision this short story being adapted in a similar manner to TLD, playing out in the first act, and then building on from that.

    I’ve actually never read a Bond comic before! I’ve heard others talk about that one before though. It sounds quite cool.
    One-note drama. Or two notes, if you throw in the inevitable "he's my best agent".

    The monotony is killing me. It is not exciting for me if it is every film.

    Some conflict is good, but since hiring high-profile actors like Judy Dench ironically we've been stuck with a lot of interactions where M is just losing their temper. There is more to M and Bond than conflict, there is more to drama than shouting.

    I don't expect full le Carré-style subtlety, but give me something with more tones than this.

    Well, to be honest Bond and M’s relationship in every version essentially boils down to conflict and then ‘he’s my best agent’. You can’t really avoid that.

    But I really think you’re underselling M in the Brosnan and Craig eras. Take Dench’s M in Craig’s first three - in CR she clearly sees Bond as a bit arrogant and a loose cannon, but a very effective agent. Clearly there’s an issue of trust there, but she lets Bond do his thing and even puts him on the case later when MI6 decides to take down Le Chiffre (albeit while putting a tracker in his arm and monitoring him). QOS is about M facing the possibility that Bond has gone off the rails with a personal vendetta. Not only that but she has to negotiate the idea of her superiors in Government doing deals with Green (incidentally this M seems much more impulsive/less by the books, much like this Bond, and clearly has a similar dislike of MI6 doing this). Obviously by the end of that film she sides with Bond and learns to trust him implicitly, letting him go off and complete the assignment. In SF Bond is definitely her top agent. Her impulsiveness, however, nearly gets him killed, and of course this mirrors what happened with Silva. Like the previous films you’ve got a similar kinship between M and Bond with both being the old guard at MI6, seen to be of questionable use in the modern world by their colleagues, and are effectively ‘played out’. After she fails to attain the list and MI6 is blown up, the film is about her trying to make things right in the context of losing her job, which is great character drama and points to the guilt she displays throughout the film. She lies to cover for Bond’s health too of course (it’s certainly development - I can’t see M in CR doing that!) It doesn’t end well for her obviously, but at least in her dying moments she claims she did one thing right, and even in death seemingly encourages Bond to stay on where he’ll do the most good.

    To be honest, I’d go as far to say all that’s actually more interesting than a lot of Le Carre I’ve read. It’s definitely not one note and shows actual character progression, not only between her and Bond, but with M as an individual character. I can only remember her shouting at Bond in CR when he breaks into her flat. Other than that it’s cold admonishments (ie. ‘Look at what your charms can do James’, ‘ran out of drink where you were?’), the occasional but somewhat distant heart to hearts, but more often than not it’s them being businesslike with each other.
    I probably am underselling Dench's M. Obviously I think she's a great actress and her M has been a selling point for the franchise in a way that no previous actor in the role could match. Some of the dialogue between Dench's M and Bond has been really good, particularly in Skyfall. I just find it tends to lean into the melodrama more heavily than I'd like more often than I'd like. I could do with an M with a slightly softer touch for the next film (and I realise now that I'm sounding like Harry Potter fans who complained that Michael Gambon's Dumbledore was too harsh compared to Richard Harris's, but now I know how they feel).

    In terms of le Carré, it's the playing of the actors in the Beeb's Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Spy that I'm talking about. The only two characters that openly lose their temper whilst on the job are Peter Guillam, who is considered damaged goods, never having recovered from having his spy network betrayed, and Percy Alleline, who is a boss out-of-his-depth who is panicking; everyone is false smiles and polite on the surface, just waiting to stick a dagger in the back of a colleague. It's very English, and I'd like to see a bit more of that.
  • edited May 24 Posts: 4,139
    007HallY wrote: »
    QBranch wrote: »
    007HallY wrote: »
    A good starting point would legitimately be M sending Bond on some sort of off the books mission for personal reasons. It doesn't have to necessarily be a direct adaptation of MR though.
    I like the examples you've provided following that paragraph. Are you familiar with Solstice, the Dynamite comic short story? It's my favourite of the comics thus far, and sees M sending Bond on an off-the-books mission to assassinate a man (former FSB) who is romantically involved with a relative of an MI6 employee. M believes the man is trying to use the relative as leverage to compromise the MI6 worker. Initially, Bond brushes off the task as something domestic, but accepts the mission upon seeing the photo of the relative...
    (Bond realizes the relative is M's daughter)

    I envision this short story being adapted in a similar manner to TLD, playing out in the first act, and then building on from that.

    I’ve actually never read a Bond comic before! I’ve heard others talk about that one before though. It sounds quite cool.
    One-note drama. Or two notes, if you throw in the inevitable "he's my best agent".

    The monotony is killing me. It is not exciting for me if it is every film.

    Some conflict is good, but since hiring high-profile actors like Judy Dench ironically we've been stuck with a lot of interactions where M is just losing their temper. There is more to M and Bond than conflict, there is more to drama than shouting.

    I don't expect full le Carré-style subtlety, but give me something with more tones than this.

    Well, to be honest Bond and M’s relationship in every version essentially boils down to conflict and then ‘he’s my best agent’. You can’t really avoid that.

    But I really think you’re underselling M in the Brosnan and Craig eras. Take Dench’s M in Craig’s first three - in CR she clearly sees Bond as a bit arrogant and a loose cannon, but a very effective agent. Clearly there’s an issue of trust there, but she lets Bond do his thing and even puts him on the case later when MI6 decides to take down Le Chiffre (albeit while putting a tracker in his arm and monitoring him). QOS is about M facing the possibility that Bond has gone off the rails with a personal vendetta. Not only that but she has to negotiate the idea of her superiors in Government doing deals with Green (incidentally this M seems much more impulsive/less by the books, much like this Bond, and clearly has a similar dislike of MI6 doing this). Obviously by the end of that film she sides with Bond and learns to trust him implicitly, letting him go off and complete the assignment. In SF Bond is definitely her top agent. Her impulsiveness, however, nearly gets him killed, and of course this mirrors what happened with Silva. Like the previous films you’ve got a similar kinship between M and Bond with both being the old guard at MI6, seen to be of questionable use in the modern world by their colleagues, and are effectively ‘played out’. After she fails to attain the list and MI6 is blown up, the film is about her trying to make things right in the context of losing her job, which is great character drama and points to the guilt she displays throughout the film. She lies to cover for Bond’s health too of course (it’s certainly development - I can’t see M in CR doing that!) It doesn’t end well for her obviously, but at least in her dying moments she claims she did one thing right, and even in death seemingly encourages Bond to stay on where he’ll do the most good.

    To be honest, I’d go as far to say all that’s actually more interesting than a lot of Le Carre I’ve read. It’s definitely not one note and shows actual character progression, not only between her and Bond, but with M as an individual character. I can only remember her shouting at Bond in CR when he breaks into her flat. Other than that it’s cold admonishments (ie. ‘Look at what your charms can do James’, ‘ran out of drink where you were?’), the occasional but somewhat distant heart to hearts, but more often than not it’s them being businesslike with each other.
    I probably am underselling Dench's M. Obviously I think she's a great actress and her M has been a selling point for the franchise in a way that no previous actor in the role could match. Some of the dialogue between Dench's M and Bond has been really good, particularly in Skyfall. I just find it tends to lean into the melodrama more heavily than I'd like more often than I'd like. I could do with an M with a slightly softer touch for the next film (and I realise now that I'm sounding like Harry Potter fans who complained that Michael Gambon's Dumbledore was too harsh compared to Richard Harris's, but now I know how they feel).

    In terms of le Carré, it's the playing of the actors in the Beeb's Tinker, Tailor, Soldier, Spy that I'm talking about. The only two characters that openly lose their temper whilst on the job are Peter Guillam, who is considered damaged goods, never having recovered from having his spy network betrayed, and Percy Alleline, who is a boss out-of-his-depth who is panicking; everyone is false smiles and polite on the surface, just waiting to stick a dagger in the back of a colleague. It's very English, and I'd like to see a bit more of that.

    There’s definitely a bit more conspicuous tension and drama in more modern Bond/M scenes. It’s a personal preference what one thinks of this as you hinted. I do understand the repeated use of the word ‘trust’ in CR and QOS in tandem with a bit of odd dialogue during the scene in M’s flat (the ‘half monk half hitman’ stuff) can be a bit funny. But that aside I think it’s a solid Bond/M relationship. I actually would have preferred something with more of that sense of drama in that TLD scene. The overall conflict is good, but Brown’s M comes off just a bit too cold for me. And not in the usual gruff M way, but in a way that gives the impression that Bond isn’t in fact his best agent but just any other ordinary operative. Neither the direction nor Brown’s performance give much of an impression he’s conflicted but ultimately resolved to go through with the assassination, which would have been more interesting to see conveyed rather than simply in a brief line. I think you’re right about Brown’s M being more an obstacle.

    I suppose what separates all versions of M from some of those Le Carre characters is that they are more blunt, straightforward, and capable figures. There are even instances where M can be openly odds with their own superiors, in turn either siding with Bond or using him to prove a hunch they have about a particular situation. Not to say M can’t be cunning or try to manipulate situations (ie. Fleming’s M basically sends Bond on a mission to snap him out of his PTSD, and obviously in SF she outright lies to him about his test results, but in pretty much all these cases lying to Bond comes from trusting he can do the job). None of the Ms seem like back slapping, shark-toothed operators, and I suspect it’s a major reason why Bond respects them.
  • Mendes4LyfeMendes4Lyfe The long road ahead
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    It's all a result of having hired Judi Dench and Ralph Fiennes and wanting to give them something to sink their teeth into. I very much doubt if we went back to a more standard, "here's your mission, get on with it" figure you would really lose much, or the films would be lesser for it.
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    talos7 wrote: »
    CrabKey wrote: »
    I daresay most of us here recall Aristotle's Poetics. Not for a second would I consider M a robot if he or she did not get crossways with Bond. Obviously the conflicts occur elsewhere within the story.

    Robot? No, it is universally a given that within a supervisor/ subordinate relationship there will be some instances of conflict

    Now, to what extent they decide to lean into that will be interesting.


    Or not lean into it at all. Which doesn't mean it couldn't happen in future films. For me the Bond/M conflict is predictable and tedious. "Oh, here's the part where M and Bond get into their usual tussle. Or here's where Bond resigns or goes rogue." I know the formula. I've been with the series since 1962. I can't imagine leaving the cinema and saying to myself, "I hate it there was no Bond/M conflict."
  • talos7talos7 New Orleans
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    CrabKey wrote: »
    talos7 wrote: »
    CrabKey wrote: »
    I daresay most of us here recall Aristotle's Poetics. Not for a second would I consider M a robot if he or she did not get crossways with Bond. Obviously the conflicts occur elsewhere within the story.

    Robot? No, it is universally a given that within a supervisor/ subordinate relationship there will be some instances of conflict

    Now, to what extent they decide to lean into that will be interesting.


    Or not lean into it at all. Which doesn't mean it couldn't happen in future films. For me the Bond/M conflict is predictable and tedious. "Oh, here's the part where M and Bond get into their usual tussle. Or here's where Bond resigns or goes rogue." I know the formula. I've been with the series since 1962. I can't imagine leaving the cinema and saying to myself, "I hate it there was no Bond/M conflict."

    Well, for others it’s an enjoyable, essential part of the characters dynamic.
  • mtmmtm United Kingdom
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    I totally agree to disagree, but I would just say a couple of things:
    Yes, Brown's M is angry and shouty, lacking Bernard Lee's warmth and subtle humour. I think he's really a product of Moore's era and just seems an obstacle to be overcome.

    Lee's M in the 70s films, most notably TMWTGG or DAF, actively seems to despise Bond and I think it actually gets a bit grating at times. There's the quick flash where he suggests to take a holiday, but from then on it's just griping. He also has the single worst M moment if you ask me in MR, where he actually seems to think Bond, this professional secret agent who has saved the world several times, is lying to him like a schoolboy about the lab in Venice(!). Although Lee himself tries to pop a flash in occasionally, the writing isn't really behind it and I could actually have done with some of the warmth which Dench's M obviously feels towards Bond and displays (look at the phone chat at the end of CR).
    I'm not sure I can think of any scenes that I feel are similar, as Dench's M feels so much more spikey to me.

    She is different, but she is literally playing a different character. And M is a very senior civil servant in charge of giving orders to assassins: I don't want her to be cuddly.
    It's a very fine line to tread: M should be professional and somewhat distant, but also they're a movie character so we want to see a little humanity in there.

  • edited May 24 Posts: 4,139
    I think a lot of it comes down to there needing to be something there in an M/Bond briefing to keep the viewer gripped. As I said, in the films they can actually be quite boring scenes if done simply for pure exposition. Usually we’ve seen what’s happened prior to this/can follow perfectly well what’ll happen without it.

    It doesn’t always have to be conflict between M and Bond necessarily, or Bond going rogue. In TND we get conflict between M and the Admiral for instance, and the stakes are raised by M butting heads with him/trying to convince the Foreign Secretary to send Bond out to investigate. We even get some subtle tension between Bond and M when the latter brings up Paris/tells him to effectively seduce her. There’s so much to keep the film interesting. I just think it’d be a shame (and rather a stupid creative decision) to simply have a ‘straightforward’ Bond/M briefing, whatever that is, without any sort of underlying drama.
  • Mendes4LyfeMendes4Lyfe The long road ahead
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    I just don't jive with the idea of Bond undermining Ms authority like he does in B25. Bond can convince M, he can have him take pity, and reluctantly go along with his agents wishes despite his own reservations. But he doesn't crumble to bonds demands, ever.

  • mtmmtm United Kingdom
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    Don't know which film you're talking about.
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    I think it’s more about how Mallory’s character was handled. It’s a bit strange seeing the same character he became in SF/SP being so complicit in Heracles. To be honest Bond shouting and disrespecting him in that film is understandable, but it’s a weird spin on the character. I prefer when Bond has respect for M, even when they’re in conflict.
  • mtmmtm United Kingdom
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    I liked it, I thought it was interesting to see Bond fully unshackled from feeling any sense of duty to this person. Had he still been 007 he wouldn't never have expressed his feelings like that; I think it's interesting to take these characters to new places.
  • Mendes4LyfeMendes4Lyfe The long road ahead
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    mtm wrote: »
    Don't know which film you're talking about.

    Can you imagine Connery saying "definitely the same desk" to Bernard Lees M and grumpily stomping off, be honest?
  • mtmmtm United Kingdom
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    mtm wrote: »
    Don't know which film you're talking about.

    Can you imagine Connery saying "definitely the same desk" to Bernard Lees M and grumpily stomping off, be honest?

    Oh you mean NO TIME TO DIE?

    And my criteria for watching Bond films isn't to think that they've got to stick to what Connery did, no. Otherwise I'd just watch the Connery films forever and nothing else, but I like all of them and embrace their differences.
  • MaxCasinoMaxCasino United States
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    I guess what I was saying before was the Bond-M relationship is getting a bit stale in some ways. Let’s try a different way for them.
  • sandbagger1sandbagger1 Sussex
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    mtm wrote: »
    I totally agree to disagree, but I would just say a couple of things:
    Yes, Brown's M is angry and shouty, lacking Bernard Lee's warmth and subtle humour. I think he's really a product of Moore's era and just seems an obstacle to be overcome.

    Lee's M in the 70s films, most notably TMWTGG or DAF, actively seems to despise Bond and I think it actually gets a bit grating at times. There's the quick flash where he suggests to take a holiday, but from then on it's just griping. He also has the single worst M moment if you ask me in MR, where he actually seems to think Bond, this professional secret agent who has saved the world several times, is lying to him like a schoolboy about the lab in Venice(!). Although Lee himself tries to pop a flash in occasionally, the writing isn't really behind it and I could actually have done with some of the warmth which Dench's M obviously feels towards Bond and displays (look at the phone chat at the end of CR).
    It's been so long since I rewatched any Bond film that isn't one of my favourites I forget how inconsistent some of these portrayals can be. Moonraker in particular I think I haven't watched since the 80's (I regarded it as the worst, though recently I see several fans say it's fun ). No doubt this gives me a somewhat rose-tinted view of Lee's M (Dr No, GF, and OHMSS are the Bond films I watch the most from his era). Now you've made me nervous to revisit the later films with Lee as M.

  • edited May 24 Posts: 4,139
    mtm wrote: »
    Don't know which film you're talking about.

    Can you imagine Connery saying "definitely the same desk" to Bernard Lees M and grumpily stomping off, be honest?

    I kinda can actually! If he’d starred in OHMSS he’d have basically had to do something like that (at least the storming out grumpily part),

    Connery’s Bond could be snarky or bitter towards M regardless.
  • sandbagger1sandbagger1 Sussex
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    007HallY wrote: »
    I suppose what separates all versions of M from some of those Le Carre characters is that they are more blunt, straightforward, and capable figures. There are even instances where M can be openly odds with their own superiors, in turn either siding with Bond or using him to prove a hunch they have about a particular situation. Not to say M can’t be cunning or try to manipulate situations (ie. Fleming’s M basically sends Bond on a mission to snap him out of his PTSD, and obviously in SF she outright lies to him about his test results, but in pretty much all these cases lying to Bond comes from trusting he can do the job). None of the Ms seem like back slapping, shark-toothed operators, and I suspect it’s a major reason why Bond respects them.

    Yes, that's fair enough, le Carré's MI6 is a nasty, petty place beset by infighting and interdepartmental squabbles, Bond is more about countering an external threat. I'd still like to try an M who is perhaps more like Alec Guinness's George Smiley in demeanor. Again, though, personal preference.
  • mtmmtm United Kingdom
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    That could be interesting. An M who is quite closed-up and an enigma to Bond, with all of the warmth removed totally. I don't know how long that could last, but an M who actually makes Bond nervous and off-kilter, rather than the slightly playful teasing Connery or Moore would do would be an interesting dynamic.
  • edited May 24 Posts: 4,139
    007HallY wrote: »
    I suppose what separates all versions of M from some of those Le Carre characters is that they are more blunt, straightforward, and capable figures. There are even instances where M can be openly odds with their own superiors, in turn either siding with Bond or using him to prove a hunch they have about a particular situation. Not to say M can’t be cunning or try to manipulate situations (ie. Fleming’s M basically sends Bond on a mission to snap him out of his PTSD, and obviously in SF she outright lies to him about his test results, but in pretty much all these cases lying to Bond comes from trusting he can do the job). None of the Ms seem like back slapping, shark-toothed operators, and I suspect it’s a major reason why Bond respects them.

    Yes, that's fair enough, le Carré's MI6 is a nasty, petty place beset by infighting and interdepartmental squabbles, Bond is more about countering an external threat. I'd still like to try an M who is perhaps more like Alec Guinness's George Smiley in demeanor. Again, though, personal preference.

    Yeah, much more like what you’d expect in a corporation than the Secret Service!

    If they went for an older male M they could do something a bit different - perhaps an M who is on the surface quite a harmless looking old man (perhaps he even plays this up, acting ‘dumb’ in front of superiors he doesn’t trust - ie. The Admiral in TND or the various ministers in the older films - all while having his own hunches about certain things and manipulating the situation to get the better of them) but in front of Bond he’s actually quite a tough, capable, and trustworthy figure. I think you’d have to be careful such an M doesn’t come off as too duplicitous, especially with Bond, but it could be quite a nice and even subtly comical take on the character. Can sort of imagine Sylvester McCoy as such an M, but I think he’s a touch too old now.
  • Mendes4LyfeMendes4Lyfe The long road ahead
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    007HallY wrote: »
    mtm wrote: »
    Don't know which film you're talking about.

    Can you imagine Connery saying "definitely the same desk" to Bernard Lees M and grumpily stomping off, be honest?

    I kinda can actually! If he’d starred in OHMSS he’d have basically had to do something like that (at least the storming out grumpily part),

    Connery’s Bond could be snarky or bitter towards M regardless.

    Ah, so not the same thing then. ;)
  • edited May 24 Posts: 4,139
    007HallY wrote: »
    mtm wrote: »
    Don't know which film you're talking about.

    Can you imagine Connery saying "definitely the same desk" to Bernard Lees M and grumpily stomping off, be honest?

    I kinda can actually! If he’d starred in OHMSS he’d have basically had to do something like that (at least the storming out grumpily part),

    Connery’s Bond could be snarky or bitter towards M regardless.

    Ah, so not the same thing then. ;)

    Not the same, but not dissimilar either. Like I said though, I can definitely see Connery doing that scene. And he never had a Mallory/was put in that same situation where he was no longer a 00 and had to confront M about something horrific his old boss had done.

    But like I said, it’s not a part of NTTD I like particularly 🤷
  • peterpeter Toronto
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    If Bond still worked for Mi6, I'd have an issue with how he treated M.

    In the end, M had no authority over him, and, if it wasn't for M's recklessness, Bond would still be in Jamaica.

    James Bond was a free agent and he rubbed his old boss's nose in it.

    And considering the nature of M's screw up, Bond's antagonistic stance was very much warranted.
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    He didn't fire him after Skyfall so I guess Bond is untouchable.
  • peterpeter Toronto
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    CrabKey wrote: »
    I daresay most of us here recall Aristotle's Poetics. Not for a second would I consider M a robot if he or she did not get crossways with Bond. Obviously the conflicts occur elsewhere within the story.





    Every scene has some conflict. If not, it’s a waste of words, pages, film, and time . Conflict, to whatever degree (doesn’t have to be a shouting match), helps propel the story.

    Without conflict, a scene becomes an exposition dump, like the scene between M and Bond in YOLT (saved by the unique setting).

    Screenwriters take to heart that in every scene, one character wants one thing, the other character wants another. It will always works better if the needs are at odds in some way…But that’s not the only way to create conflict…. Some examples:

    DN: conflict arises with that “damn beretta” and a bigger conflict between the two men (obviously Bond wanted to keep his old gun and disregarded M’s warnings about it).

    FRWL: a small moment where it shows Bond’s fooling about (the hat toss and his next trick), doesn’t impress M. Bond is put back in his place with one cold stare from Daddy . As @talos7 stated, a superior and underling will always have an under current of conflict, especially conflict of status (know your place).
    And shortly thereafter, Bond matter-of-factly states that this is “some sort of trap”, and M pats him down with “well, obviously it’s a trap”….

    GF: M smacks his boy’s wrist for sleeping with Goldfinger’s girlfriend, and Bond claps back about not knowing what all of this is about.

    TB: “well, now that we’re all here…” Later M is in more conflict with Captain Pritchard and pats his boy Bond on the head…

    The writers know what they’re doing and there (usually) is conflict (save for scenes like the aforementioned YOLT, and there’s a clear difference between the interesting combativeness in DN or GF or TB or the stare down in FRWL compared with the exposition dump of YOLT)….

    EDIT: sometimes, on the rare occasion, a writer has to resign him or herself to a scene where they can’t find conflict and need to just do the exposition dump. And we’re told to camouflage it, make it fast (and clear), and move on.

    But, rule of thumb: find the conflict first (and 99/100 it is there); if not, and the info needs to be given to the audience: hide it well, make it quick and clear. Get out fast and move on.

    That’s why this is a difficult craft; writers massage in the conflict and obstacles in every scene, building it, propelling the story in a forward trajectory until we reach the final climax, and then the resolution (which usually is just that, and is the only scene, or small sequence, that often doesn’t need conflict. But prior to the resolution, the more obstacles and conflicts that every scene contains, the harder a protagonist has, the better the script/film).

    So one may not leave the cinema and express a happiness that there was conflict with M, because oftentimes you only pick up all of this on an unconscious level in the first few viewings. But that’s often a part of what makes a viewing experience all the more enjoyable (conflict/obstacles and overcoming the various ones a protagonist will run into in every scene, or, what’s the point of that scene if it was absent this all important and delicious ingredient??)
  • mtmmtm United Kingdom
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    A reminder that Peter does this for a living so has a pretty nailed-on understanding.
    Feel free to pick holes in what (or in the case of some here, every single thing) I say, but he really does know what he's talking about.

    It's a good point about YOLT: I've seen that film many times and off the top of my head can't recall a single thing about that scene once Bond has sat down.
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    @Peter and @mtm - I prefer not to see M and Bond get into another conflict, argument, spat, disagreement, whatever you want to call it. Why that triggers a lengthy response about the nature of conflict in script writing eludes me. As talos7 said, others enjoy it. Fair enough. You could have said that or left it alone.
  • peterpeter Toronto
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    CrabKey wrote: »
    @Peter and @mtm - I prefer not to see M and Bond get into another conflict, argument, spat, disagreement, whatever you want to call it. Why that triggers a lengthy response about the nature of conflict in script writing eludes me. As talos7 said, others enjoy it. Fair enough. You could have said that or left it alone.

    @CrabKey i wrote about conflict because that was what was being discussed. And;

    I actually enjoy discussing why conflict’s necessary in each scene of every film. I actually enjoy it. That’s all. Why you’re taking it as an affront or an insult is confusing to me.

    I love every aspect of scriptwriting, and that’s why I went into detail. Had nothing to do with you, and everything I love about the anatomy of a screenplay. Since the discussion was conflict or not, that’s why I jumped in.

    So settle down, please. I didn’t write what I wrote to (excuse the original typo— didn’t mean to make this post so sexy) elicit that kind of response. And I didn’t write that post to rile you up.

    Please, give it a rest.
  • sandbagger1sandbagger1 Sussex
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    peter wrote: »
    CrabKey wrote: »
    I daresay most of us here recall Aristotle's Poetics. Not for a second would I consider M a robot if he or she did not get crossways with Bond. Obviously the conflicts occur elsewhere within the story.





    Every scene has some conflict. If not, it’s a waste of words, pages, film, and time . Conflict, to whatever degree (doesn’t have to be a shouting match), helps propel the story.

    Without conflict, a scene becomes an exposition dump, like the scene between M and Bond in YOLT (saved by the unique setting).

    Screenwriters take to heart that in every scene, one character wants one thing, the other character wants another. It will always works better if the needs are at odds in some way…But that’s not the only way to create conflict…. Some examples:

    DN: conflict arises with that “damn beretta” and a bigger conflict between the two men (obviously Bond wanted to keep his old gun and disregarded M’s warnings about it).

    FRWL: a small moment where it shows Bond’s fooling about (the hat toss and his next trick), doesn’t impress M. Bond is put back in his place with one cold stare from Daddy . As @talos7 stated, a superior and underling will always have an under current of conflict, especially conflict of status (know your place).
    And shortly thereafter, Bond matter-of-factly states that this is “some sort of trap”, and M pats him down with “well, obviously it’s a trap”….

    GF: M smacks his boy’s wrist for sleeping with Goldfinger’s girlfriend, and Bond claps back about not knowing what all of this is about.

    TB: “well, now that we’re all here…” Later M is in more conflict with Captain Pritchard and pats his boy Bond on the head…

    The writers know what they’re doing and there (usually) is conflict (save for scenes like the aforementioned YOLT, and there’s a clear difference between the interesting combativeness in DN or GF or TB or the stare down in FRWL compared with the exposition dump of YOLT)….

    EDIT: sometimes, on the rare occasion, a writer has to resign him or herself to a scene where they can’t find conflict and need to just do the exposition dump. And we’re told to camouflage it, make it fast (and clear), and move on.

    But, rule of thumb: find the conflict first (and 99/100 it is there); if not, and the info needs to be given to the audience: hide it well, make it quick and clear. Get out fast and move on.

    That’s why this is a difficult craft; writers massage in the conflict and obstacles in every scene, building it, propelling the story in a forward trajectory until we reach the final climax, and then the resolution (which usually is just that, and is the only scene, or small sequence, that often doesn’t need conflict. But prior to the resolution, the more obstacles and conflicts that every scene contains, the harder a protagonist has, the better the script/film).

    So one may not leave the cinema and express a happiness that there was conflict with M, because oftentimes you only pick up all of this on an unconscious level in the first few viewings. But that’s often a part of what makes a viewing experience all the more enjoyable (conflict/obstacles and overcoming the various ones a protagonist will run into in every scene, or, what’s the point of that scene if it was absent this all important and delicious ingredient??)

    Thank you Peter, those are some nice examples. I particularly like the FRWL example where Bond is showing off and gets cowed by a look. That’s another film I haven’t seen in a while.
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