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The MI6 community bond film [Mk. 2]

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  • JWESTBROOKJWESTBROOK
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    @Virage That really helped :) I'm in a writing frenzy, MUST RESIST. Back to the action:

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    Sleale says, "Sir, I couldn't get too much information from this Poppovich. He is - was - a very weak man. Just a contact, nobody significant."

    The mentor stops petting his cat. "So who was it you let get away, Number 2?" replies the mysterious character.

    Steale is struck with a look of shame and slight fear, as he stutters "b-b-Bond. And the older fellow appears to be some R&D technician for MI6, nobody important."

    "Was it Bond who killed 7 and 9 today?" the figure replies.

    "No, it appears MI6 has sent another man."

    "THIS WILL NOT DO, Number 2. We can not operate without those Chinese manifestos!"

    Cut to O'Shea (002) -

    He pulls up to a run down apartment building and walks up to the room guide.

    He buzzes the room for Poppovich, with no reply. He then walks down the alley and jumps up to the fire escape.....
  • Char35tChar35t
    Posts: 289
    and slumps against the brick wall looking up into the stars....deep in thought, from just below him comes a sound of an ally cat hissing...002 almost jumps out of his skin. He looks down and sees a dark hair "lady of the night" motioning for him to come in..
    002 slips into the window without a sound, ready for Love Russian style.
    Instead he finds Anne St. Lui in spandex ninja style cat suit with a finger to her mouth, she places an usb traveler into OO2 hand and is gone. 002 loads it into his Ipod and uploads the Manifests. Shipments of rare man made and natural crystals along with accounting reports of reported scrap or broken crystals....from all over the world funneling into Australia and a report of a stolen russian prototype....
  • VirageVirage
    Posts: 1,856
    Missle the "Father of all bombs"
    002 hits the home button and puts the iPod away.
    Suddernly a black japanese import car pulls up, it's all pimped up, it has a stylized octopuss logo on it......
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    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Father_of_All_Bombs
  • JWESTBROOKJWESTBROOK
    edited September 2011 Posts: 5,745
    UPDATE:

    All I have to say is -_-

    TO:
    and slumps against the brick wall looking up into the stars....deep in thought, from just below him comes a sound of an ally cat hissing...002 almost jumps out of his skin. He looks down and sees a dark hair "lady of the night" motioning for him to come in..
    002 slips into the window without a sound, ready for Love Russian style.
    Instead he finds Anne St. Lui in spandex ninja style cat suit with a finger to her mouth, she places an usb traveler into OO2 hand and is gone. 002 loads it into his Ipod and uploads the Manifests. Shipments of rare man made and natural crystals along with accounting reports of reported scrap or broken crystals....from all over the world funneling into Australia and a report of a stolen russian prototype....
    ..sigh

  • VirageVirage
    Posts: 1,856
    [edit mine] A window opens it's a big built Russian Gangster
    Gangster: Get him boys
  • Char35tChar35t
    edited September 2011 Posts: 289
    Two canisters of CS and a flash/bang are tossed into the cheap hotel room, two professionals with protective masks packing silenced Brugger+Thomet MP 9s (not russian but swiss) and two rough and tough locals packing ancient looking silenced Type 64 submachine guns. 002 dives toward and pulls his dual Fabrique Nationale Five-seveN pistols...
  • VirageVirage
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    You do relise he is out side?
  • Char35tChar35t
    Posts: 289
    ---actually he is inside the hotel room....where he was loading and reading the usb drive....unless you deleted that section of your last post were he leaves the room.
  • VirageVirage
    edited September 2011 Posts: 1,856
    I didn't
  • Char35tChar35t
    Posts: 289
    not a problem will change it.
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    002 dives back threw the open window as silenced bullets threw the space 002 use to occupy (the CS cloud builds) shattering a 1970s lamp, a vintage tv and a black velvet "painting" of Elvis. The flash bang goes off. The two rough locals rush threw the window letting rip....
  • VirageVirage
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    Story update

    Bond is sent to russia, to find a witness on 004s case. It has something to do with shipping mani festos (see below). When arriving he meets local agent Poppovich. After leaving a Q briefing the container ship that held Qs Lab is attacked and Bond, Poppovich and Q disappear.

    002 Adien O'Shea is assigned to find bond. While gathering evidence he is attacked by a Black Mec. which he quickly takes care of. Meanwhile Kane Sleale vists his mentor (blofelt) to discuss the missing manifestos. Meanwhile in Russia 002 discovers that there is more then Manifestos missing.A prototype bomb the father of all bombs disappears but SPECTER henchmen arrive and a fight begins.....
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  • Char35tChar35t
    Posts: 289
    mash cut.....

    a view of binoculars looking down upon the alley way there the SPECTER henchmen are firing...
  • VirageVirage
    Posts: 1,856
    Suddenly there is an explosion. Seale's henchmen Alimento Dipesci clenches his teeth O'Shea comes out of the ally steals the car and drives off....
  • thelivingroyalethelivingroyale
    edited September 2011 Posts: 12,837
    A spectre henchman fires a bazooka, 002 dives out just as the rocket blows up the car, after landing hard on the floor, spectre henchmen sprint towards him...
  • VirageVirage
    Posts: 1,856
    They kick 002 in the face, he jumps up and drops his cell phone. This distracts them and 002 sprints into the ally. 002 presses a button on his "Q" app. Firework by Katey Perry plays through the cell, before it explodes.

    James bond's eyes open slowly he is in a container, in front of him is a nurse with a needle
    Nurse: Go back to sleep 007
    She injects bond with the formula and he gose back to sleep.

    002's TVR approaches a sign in the Russian wilderness saying (in Russian) DANGER YOUR ENTERING A MILITARY ZONE. CUTION BOMB TESTING.
  • Char35tChar35t
    edited September 2011 Posts: 289
    The trees part and open on a land escape while the sign might have said bomb testing but there had not been any major testing for years. The landscape does show signs of repair and fresh paint as he rolls into the mock village, complete with swimming pool. Bond parks the TVR in the gas station garage and gets out wearing a Russian Army uniform. 002 chuckles a bit remembering the first time he had been here and how times had changed "..changed indeed.." as he rounds the corner to the...
  • VirageVirage
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    Bump
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  • JWESTBROOKJWESTBROOK
    Posts: 5,745
    If I could back this discussion up approx 16 posts and continue, I would. :)
  • VirageVirage
    edited September 2011 Posts: 1,856
    Okay take it from the post at the top of the page
    @Virage That really helped :) I'm in a writing frenzy, MUST RESIST. Back to the action:

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    Sleale says, "Sir, I couldn't get too much information from this Poppovich. He is - was - a very weak man. Just a contact, nobody significant."

    The mentor stops petting his cat. "So who was it you let get away, Number 2?" replies the mysterious character.

    Steale is struck with a look of shame and slight fear, as he stutters "b-b-Bond. And the older fellow appears to be some R&D technician for MI6, nobody important."

    "Was it Bond who killed 7 and 9 today?" the figure replies.

    "No, it appears MI6 has sent another man."

    "THIS WILL NOT DO, Number 2. We can not operate without those Chinese manifestos!"

    Cut to O'Shea (002) -

    He pulls up to a run down apartment building and walks up to the room guide.

    He buzzes the room for Poppovich, with no reply. He then walks down the alley and jumps up to the fire escape.....
  • JWESTBROOKJWESTBROOK
    edited September 2011 Posts: 5,745
    I don't want to write the whole thing! But some of these ideas are.. out there. A cat lady?
    Anyways, to the point:

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    002 has brought his lock kit, but wont need it - the window to the fire escape is busted.

    He climbs in, cautious at first. All the paintings, mirrors, lampshades, and cushions have been displaced. Tell tale signs of someone looking for a bug.

    He checks the fridge, bread and cheese. "Poppovich seemed a simple man" he smirks.

    He notices a blood trail that leads to a bloody finger, a octopus ring still attached. The finger is still warm to the touch.

    He locks the apartment door, nobody's getting away from this, and pulls out his W P99.

    A shot of O'Shea can be seen through a shuttered door. Cut to:

    Suddenly a man busts out from a closet and tackles 002 into the wall.

    His head is bashed by a fist before he has time to see, and clever camera work doesn't reveal the character....

  • Char35tChar35t
    edited September 2011 Posts: 289
    too cliched....
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    cut to: briefing room with large wooden table and high backed seats...

    men and one woman sitting eyes track number 8 carrying a silver brief case toward Blofeld.

    cut: 002 spinning to face the fist. A dart sticks into his neck as he slumps to the floor... a woman's voice with thin chinese accent: "you should have looked up at the stars..."

    cut- camera view: head of table, hands on brief case ready to open, eight phones get a text message as they scramble to look at them...

    cut: a woman's hand with a text "DEATH TO SPECTRE ~ Q"

    cut: small mushroom cloud rises and brightens the night sky as chunks of ship, pier and storage tanks fly into the air.
  • VirageVirage
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    Blofeld Finishes watching a computer simulation of a blast,the women hands him the phone. He crushes it with his hands.

    002 is in the back of a hummer full of goons, he begins to regain consciousness, he opens his eyes as much as he dears.
    Driver: Time for more anesthetic
    Goon #1: Okay
    goon #1 puts down his gun, 002 secretly grabs it, goon #1 grabs a needle. 002 raises the gun shoots goon #1 and points the gun at the driver....

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    Cu'mon people participate
  • JWESTBROOKJWESTBROOK
    Posts: 5,745
    too cliched....
    Uh, theres a certain way Bond movies play out, not cliched.


    cut: 002 spinning to face the fist. A dart sticks into his neck as he slumps to the floor... a woman's voice with thin chinese accent: "you should have looked up at the stars..."
    Uh, the punch from my post knocked him out..

    His head is bashed by a fist before he has time to see, and clever camera work doesn't reveal the character....

    cut- camera view: head of table, hands on brief case ready to open, eight phones get a text message as they scramble to look at them...

    cut: a woman's hand with a text "DEATH TO SPECTRE ~ Q"

    cut: small mushroom cloud rises and brightens the night sky as chunks of ship, pier and storage tanks fly into the air.
    Are you kidding me? Cut, cut, cut. Not how a movie plays out.. AT ALL. Oh, and Q wouldn't launch a British missle into a public harbor. Please take this seriously.



  • Char35tChar35t
    edited October 2011 Posts: 289
    someone jumping out of a closet is about as cliched as you can get....

    "His head" who's? ohh you meant 002 not the man that jumped out from the closet well Anne St. Lui (Quantum agent) knocked the jumping man out and spiked 002.

    you never seen cut aways to get reactions in different places happening at the same time? The missile wasnt, it was the briefcase that went up....Q = Quantum vs Spectre.

    the point of this thread is to adapt and build a script that flows from one post to another not some grand vision of one poster but for all involved. just because you might not liked a previous post by someone else we should work that that post and add to it instead of scrapping the previous posts. I killed off Blofeld to show (albeit in protest) to show how we can roll with the punches (posts). The elements that are the foundation of the script, elements of the film:

    007= drugged in a container
    004= dead but found odd data
    002= looking for clues and data
    Blofeld= angry
    Bond girl= missing right now but suggest Anne St. Lui
    data= shipping manifests. stolen prototype.

    the way the film is going is even more action based than QOS...need more dialog and plot building and less action.

    here is a suggestion: how about we have a powwow over the elements and visions we have....

    the main reason for the scene that I wrote this:

    "and slumps against the brick wall looking up into the stars....deep in thought, from just below him comes a sound of an ally cat hissing...002 almost jumps out of his skin. He looks down and sees a dark hair "lady of the night" motioning for him to come in..
    002 slips into the window without a sound, ready for Love Russian style.
    Instead he finds Anne St. Lui in spandex ninja style cat suit with a finger to her mouth, she places an usb traveler into OO2 hand and is gone. 002 loads it into his Ipod and uploads the Manifests. Shipments of rare man made and natural crystals along with accounting reports of reported scrap or broken crystals....from all over the world funneling into Australia and a report of a stolen russian prototype."

    was to show that 002 is at a loss where to continue his search, to introduce the Bond Girl, the hiss makes more sense that a "hey you" or a bird call at night, to show 002 made a mistake thinking she was a call girl that turns out to be an agent of someone, the use of a gadget and what the secondary plot of the script...rather than an action scene. oh and his weapons are a pair of 5-7 FNs! :)
  • 0BradyM0Bondfanatic70BradyM0Bondfanatic7 Quantum Floral Arrangements: "We Have Petals Everywhere"
    Posts: 28,694
    someone jumping out of a closet is about as cliched as you can get....

    "His head" who's? ohh you meant 002 not the man that jumped out from the closet well Anne St. Lui (Quantum agent) knocked the jumping man out and spiked 002.

    you never seen cut aways to get reactions in different places happening at the same time? The missile wasnt, it was the briefcase that went up....Q = Quantum vs Spectre.

    the point of this thread is to adapt and build a script that flows from one post to another not some grand vision of one poster but for all involved. just because you might not liked a previous post by someone else we should work that that post and add to it instead of scrapping the previous posts. I killed off Blofeld to show (albeit in protest) to show how we can roll with the punches (posts). The elements that are the foundation of the script, elements of the film:

    007= drugged in a container
    004= dead but found odd data
    002= looking for clues and data
    Blofeld= angry
    Bond girl= missing right now but suggest Anne St. Lui
    data= shipping manifests. stolen prototype.

    the way the film is going is even more action based than QOS...need more dialog and plot building and less action.

    here is a suggestion: how about we have a powwow over the elements and visions we have....

    the main reason for the scene that I wrote this:

    "and slumps against the brick wall looking up into the stars....deep in thought, from just below him comes a sound of an ally cat hissing...002 almost jumps out of his skin. He looks down and sees a dark hair "lady of the night" motioning for him to come in..
    002 slips into the window without a sound, ready for Love Russian style.
    Instead he finds Anne St. Lui in spandex ninja style cat suit with a finger to her mouth, she places an usb traveler into OO2 hand and is gone. 002 loads it into his Ipod and uploads the Manifests. Shipments of rare man made and natural crystals along with accounting reports of reported scrap or broken crystals....from all over the world funneling into Australia and a report of a stolen russian prototype."

    was to show that 002 is at a loss where to continue his search, to introduce the Bond Girl, the hiss makes more sense that a "hey you" or a bird call at night, to show 002 made a mistake thinking she was a call girl that turns out to be an agent of someone, the use of a gadget and what the secondary plot of the script...rather than an action scene. oh and his weapons are a pair of 5-7 FNs! :)
    What happened to the 10-11 line rule?!
  • VirageVirage
    Posts: 1,856
    [Whacks head repeatedly on key board]

    ALL RIGHT TAKE IT FROM MY POST, BRING IN THE GIRL SOON AND...

    STAY ON TOPIC!!!!! X( X( X( X( X( X( X( X( X( X( X( X( X(
  • Char35tChar35t
    Posts: 289
    as the driver realizes he is in trouble and turns...glass explodes as bullets rip into driver and engine. the side door is ripped open and a female chinese accented voice orders "OUT O'shea...now" three suited professionals packing MP7s flank a beautiful woman in a long black trench coat and red beret. O'shea exits the vehicle, hands over the pistol.

    ASL: "The home office thought you might need some help...Anne St. Lui" to 002 "Spectre is so cheap anymore..." a tow truck stops a man with a tarp gets out.. "Get rid of that trash..." in chinese to the hitman next to her. the two men cover the front of the vehicle, hitch it up and drive away. The other two get in a delivery truck and drive off as 002 is handed a rucksack and a usb traveler. ASL: "Your ipod, 5-7 FN pistols, come on to my TVR we need to get you out of here....oh and there is a uniform of a...
  • VirageVirage
    Posts: 1,856
    Russian general
    002 why?
    Anne: where going testing.... The big test.....
  • VirageVirage
    Posts: 1,856
    BUUUUUMMMMMMP
  • 0BradyM0Bondfanatic70BradyM0Bondfanatic7 Quantum Floral Arrangements: "We Have Petals Everywhere"
    Posts: 28,694
    Virage wrote:
    BUUUUUMMMMMMP

    It's been so long I doubt anyone involved remembers this thread's story. I thought I'd never see it again myself.
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