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007 Risico part 1, 2, 3 and 4
ok i came up with a bond story idea, some of it is really over the top but i think its ok and could work. its quite detailed so im gonna split it into parts. next part will be posted soon.
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bond is in the snowy mountains, wearing what looks like a skii suit and a parachute. breaking into a factory. he takes out several guards and enters through a vent. he manages to break into a vault and steal secure documents, the alarm goes of. bond uses a snowmobile to escape but is chased by guards on skiis, snowmobiles. and a helicopter. eventually bond comes towards the end of the mountains and jumps of the snowmobile. he pulls a cord on the waist of his skii suit, and it transforms into a wing suit (used by basejumpers). he glides through the mountains as the helicopter pursues. the helicopter keeps firing machine guns. a guard on a cliff shoots at bond with a bazooka, but bond dodges the rocket and it hits the chopper, blowing it up. before the guard can fire another shot bond flys into him and knocks him of the cliff. bond then spots a helicopter with a union jack on it. knowing its his exit chopper he pulls the parachute cord and floats to the chopper, unhooking his chute and jumping onboard. the chopper flies of and the opening title sequence starts. (song: final countdown) 
cut to MI6 HQ, where bond goes towards ms office. outside is her new secetary moneypenny (naomi cambell). she introduces herself and they flirt for a bit, then M calls bond in. M tells bond about a small nation near south america, with one large island and several much smaller islands dotted round the outside. this nation is called the risico islands. bond knows about them. the president of risico is called general grecco (arnold schwarzenegger), he has an eyepatch and is a modern day hitler. there is a small civil war going on between a freedom fighter group led by a women named shakira torres (freema ageyman) and the risican goverment. M says a control device for a deadly nuclear warhead firing satellite owned by the UK and the US has been stolen. MI6 thinks the risican goverment may have been involved, along with quantum. bond must travel to risico posing as an irish black market trader offering nuclear warheads to grecco. in reality the russian crook was recently put in jail by mi6. while there he must find out what the general and quantum are up to and report back. his contact in risico is MI6 agent lotta bootay (lacey turner). on his way out bond is instructed to visist Q branch, who has a new head. bond meets major boothroyd, who would rather be known as Q, and his assistant, R (simon pegg as Q, nick frost as R). Q knows about bonds track record with sex and violence and disaproves, while the young and clumsy R thinks its cool and idolises 007. Q gives bond a new gun, a new aston martin DBS with a smoke screen, a grappling hook, a parachute and a watch with a lock pick hidden inside.
so bond goes to risico, once hes landed he visits a bar where he bumps into lotta bootay. they spot jack rider (john simm) a rich buissnessman, who lotta tells bond is secretly working for quantum. after beating rider at poker bond and lotta are invited to a party at the risico tower (a massive tower with a quarter of it under the sea). while there, lotta distracts bond while he sneakily exits to a balcony and using his grappling hook he breaks into riders office. he then starts to leave but on the way out in a private room he witnesses a meeting between general grecco and rider. rider says that "number 1" is demanding 200 million dollars for quantums services, grecco says he will get the money soon. rider then introduces grecco to lotta, who is handcuffed. rider saw lottas pistol and knew straight away that she was a spy. lotta is taken away by rider and his men and grecco exits. bond comes out from behind the door and looks around. a guard spots him and radios for help as bond shoots him. a firefight breaks out as the guests are evacuated. bond fights his way to the roof of the tower where he is cornered by guards. bond jumps then turns and shoots the edge with his grappling hook. after sliding to the bottom lotta arrives in a speed boat, she escaped. bond jumps in the back and fires and pursuing guards. rider pursues them in his boat but bond shoots him dead. they escape to land. back in the city lotta says its not safe for her to stay and shes leaving for london. but she points out since rider is dead and grecco never saw him then his cover was still intact. she kisses bond and leaves. the next day bond arranges to meet grecco posing as the irish black market trader MI6 have kidnapped.
classic gunbarrel sequence returns
bond is in the snowy mountains, wearing what looks like a skii suit and a parachute. breaking into a factory. he takes out several guards and enters through a vent. he manages to break into a vault and steal secure documents, the alarm goes of. bond uses a snowmobile to escape but is chased by guards on skiis, snowmobiles. and a helicopter. eventually bond comes towards the end of the mountains and jumps of the snowmobile. he pulls a cord on the waist of his skii suit, and it transforms into a wing suit (used by basejumpers). he glides through the mountains as the helicopter pursues. the helicopter keeps firing machine guns. a guard on a cliff shoots at bond with a bazooka, but bond dodges the rocket and it hits the chopper, blowing it up. before the guard can fire another shot bond flys into him and knocks him of the cliff. bond then spots a helicopter with a union jack on it. knowing its his exit chopper he pulls the parachute cord and floats to the chopper, unhooking his chute and jumping onboard. the chopper flies of and the opening title sequence starts. (song: final countdown) cut to MI6 HQ, where bond goes towards ms office. outside is her new secetary moneypenny (naomi cambell). she introduces herself and they flirt for a bit, then M calls bond in. M tells bond about a small nation near south america, with one large island and several much smaller islands dotted round the outside. this nation is called the risico islands. bond knows about them. the president of risico is called general grecco (arnold schwarzenegger), he has an eyepatch and is a modern day hitler. there is a small civil war going on between a freedom fighter group led by a women named shakira torres (freema ageyman) and the risican goverment. M says a control device for a deadly nuclear warhead firing satellite owned by the UK and the US has been stolen. MI6 thinks the risican goverment may have been involved, along with quantum. bond must travel to risico posing as an irish black market trader offering nuclear warheads to grecco. in reality the russian crook was recently put in jail by mi6. while there he must find out what the general and quantum are up to and report back. his contact in risico is MI6 agent lotta bootay (lacey turner). on his way out bond is instructed to visist Q branch, who has a new head. bond meets major boothroyd, who would rather be known as Q, and his assistant, R (simon pegg as Q, nick frost as R). Q knows about bonds track record with sex and violence and disaproves, while the young and clumsy R thinks its cool and idolises 007. Q gives bond a new gun, a new aston martin DBS with a smoke screen, a grappling hook, a parachute and a watch with a lock pick hidden inside.
so bond goes to risico, once hes landed he visits a bar where he bumps into lotta bootay. they spot jack rider (john simm) a rich buissnessman, who lotta tells bond is secretly working for quantum. after beating rider at poker bond and lotta are invited to a party at the risico tower (a massive tower with a quarter of it under the sea). while there, lotta distracts bond while he sneakily exits to a balcony and using his grappling hook he breaks into riders office. he then starts to leave but on the way out in a private room he witnesses a meeting between general grecco and rider. rider says that "number 1" is demanding 200 million dollars for quantums services, grecco says he will get the money soon. rider then introduces grecco to lotta, who is handcuffed. rider saw lottas pistol and knew straight away that she was a spy. lotta is taken away by rider and his men and grecco exits. bond comes out from behind the door and looks around. a guard spots him and radios for help as bond shoots him. a firefight breaks out as the guests are evacuated. bond fights his way to the roof of the tower where he is cornered by guards. bond jumps then turns and shoots the edge with his grappling hook. after sliding to the bottom lotta arrives in a speed boat, she escaped. bond jumps in the back and fires and pursuing guards. rider pursues them in his boat but bond shoots him dead. they escape to land. back in the city lotta says its not safe for her to stay and shes leaving for london. but she points out since rider is dead and grecco never saw him then his cover was still intact. she kisses bond and leaves. the next day bond arranges to meet grecco posing as the irish black market trader MI6 have kidnapped.
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Simon Pegg as Q is a mistake, because he plays Benji Dunn in the MISSION: IMPOSSIBLE films, where he basically designs equipment for Tom Cruise.
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But I have to agree with PurvisWade: Rihanna ( and Eminem for that matter) shouldn't go near Bond material with a 10 foot pole. You need an original title for a Bond movie, not something that's been used in a pop song. Also Lotta Anal? C'mon, you can do a lot better than that. But those details aside, keep working at it.
i forgot about pegg in mission impossible but i just thought him n frost could give the movie some comedy
Posing as irish black market trader partick mcdonald, bond is taken on a tour of the islands by general grecco, along with several soldiers and greccos bodyguard, who isknown simply as "rodriguez". while in the helicopter, grecco talks about the beauty of the island and tells a story of how his ancestors braved storms and attacks to find the island. he said due to the risks they made, it was made risico, meaning risk. bond then looks outside and sees the massive army risico has. troops are dotted all over the jungle, helicopters, jeeps, quadbikes and hover crafts patrol the area. the general explains how most risicans are trained for the army, including women. there are several military bases on the main island but the biggest and most defended is on one of the smaller islands, known as the scorpio island, in a massive valley protected by a dam. they land there. the general takes bond through the lab, revealing several nuclear warheads, 3 space shuttles, a massive osprey type veichle and the stolen device. grecco offers bond a price and bond says he will think about it.
Bond is then flown back to the mainland. 007 recieves a call on his phone, it is felix lieter. lieter says that he is stationed in risico and wants bond to meet him. bond meets him at a boxing match, they travel to bonds beachside hotel where they discuss the mission. while there, bond spots a mysterious women emerge from the sea. she jumps in a car and drives of. felix is being forced to leave on a seperate assignment in the morning but he takes bond to a safe house where he gives him equipment and key codes that he will need to break into the base on scorpio island. bond says goodbye to felix and leaves. at night, wearing combat clothes and Qs parachute, bond sneaks onto the top of the dam, taking out the guards on patrol he silently rappels into the dam and breaks into the facility. using stealth he is able to secure photos of the nuclear war heads. however, as he tries to break into a safe to retrieve the stolen device an alarm sounds. as tons of guards run for the room, bond sets a timer on some explosives felix gives him and runs. using a machine gun he engages the guards. he then crashes out of a low level window and dives for cover behind rocks as he is shot at. surrounded by gunfire, bond feels trapped and done for until his aston martin crashes in out of no where. he quickly dives in and it speeds of.
he recognises the driver as the woman from the beach, she reveals herself as shakira torres. she says not many know what she looks like, but that lieter had worked closley with her and her allies, she was given spare keys to bonds car and decided to help him out. bond looks behind and sees that cars are pursuing them. bond takes the wheel. they race across the bridge onto the main island while still being chased and shot at. bond uses the smoke screen to shake of the cars and heads into the jungle. bond presses a button and the roof of the car falls of. he tells shakira to grab onto him and pulls his parachute cord. they shoot out of the car and into the sky. floating into the jungle, shakira leads bond into the trees. she takes him through caves until they arrive in an ancient temple, hidden from the goverment. the freedom fighters shakira leads have set up camp there. shakira explains to bond why she is doing this, grecco was once married to her mother but she disagreed with his ways. so he took her mother out to the top of one of the risico cliffs. then he grabbed her and cut of her arm with a machette, throwing her of the cliff where she was eaten by sharks. shakira had been told not to come but she snuck along and saw the whole thing. the police assumed the sharks had bitten of the arm and that she must of cut herself during the fall to attract them, there was no evidence to imply grecco was guilty and nobody believed shakira, she was just a little girl. so shakira was raised by her grandmother, a protester against the lack of democracy. until one day, she was murdered by soldiers led by grecco. so shakira joined the freedom fighters and soon became the leader. bond says he understands what its like to lose someone (referring to vesper), and they sleep together.
Punctuate. Please.
All you've got right now is just a block of text, and it's very difficult to read. You aren't using captial letters and you aren't using paragraphs, and you aren't using proper punctuation. The combined effect is that it's like bad 3D artwork at the fair, the ones where you have to squint to see the image properly. It's headache-inducing.
Also, most of your story is brazenly ripped off from other works. The basic plot is THE EXPENDABLES. The villain "Grecco" is taken directly from the most-recent Bond video game, BLOODSTONE. Even Shakira's backstory, with the fire destroying her life is plagiarised from Camille in QUANTUM OF SOLACE. And I'm pretty sure I'm seeing elements of METAL GEAR SOLID in there, too. I don't mean to be super-critical here - if I offer criticism, it's intended as constructive criticism, to make you into a better writer - but if you are going to take this seriously (and if you want others to take it and you seriously), then it needs to be all your own work. Otherwise, you're wasting both your time and ours.
Even if the comparison to METAL GEAR is coincidental, and your idea is a prequel to BLOODSTONE, it still doesn't address the other issues. Your island nation, "Risico" is a South American archipelago ruled by a corrupt dictator and wracked by civil war - THE EXPENDABLES follows a group of mercenaries as they try and depose a corrupt dictator from his South American island nation, Vilena, with the help of local resistance fighters. And Shakira's backstory revolves around her fleeing from a burning building as a child. But Camille Montes in QUANTUM OF SOLACE was trapped inside a burning building as a child when General Medrano killed her family. Do you see the similarities? There's far too many of them; your story apepars to be made up of ideas from at least four other works. You need to put some original ideas into your story.
Also, your grammar and punctuation still need work.
some slack.
im changing sharkiras backstory now, it was meant to be a prequel to bloodstone yes. the idea was that bond would get distracted by fighting a villian from previous films who will return later on in the story (dont want to give too much away right now), and grecco would escape, then plan one last desperate attempt to change the world with a suicide mission in athens, which bond stops in bloodstones opening.
The next morning, bond wakes up and sees shakira is not in bed. he gets dressed and leaves the tent, spotting shakira outside shouting instructions to freedom fighters. She walks over and talks to bond, first about how much she enjoyed last night, then about the operation she has planned. Called "operation nighthawk", it involves storming the military base and dismantling then destroying the nuclear weapons. Bond says not to forget he still needs the stolen device, sharkira says one of her spys spotted a man who was presumed to be a quantum operative leaving the base with the device in a briefcase. She does not know where its been taken, she tells bond his only hope is finding the quantum agent. Bond recieves a text from mi6, saying that an agent currently working for the risicans wants to defect and he is to report to the old power plant in risicos capital. He tells shakira that he will track down the quantum agent soon but first has some buisness to take care of. He kisses shakira then leaves the temple and heads through the jungle into risicos capital.
Bond arrives at what is presumed to be an abandoned power plant. He pulls out his gun, suddenly, he spots a figure in the shadows. Aiming the gun he walks closer, the figure reveals himself to be mr white. Bond immediatly hits white with his gun and asks what the hell he wants. White begs for mercy, saying he was stationed in risico to monitor the working relationship between grecco and quantum. He says that MI6 agreed to help him. Bond says he couldn't care less what MI6 say and prepares to shoot white before mi6 agent bill tanner rushes out of the shadows and prevents him from killing white. Tanner explains that white has vital information for bonds mission, and bond reluctantly agrees to transport white to the safe house felix showed him. bond bundles white in the back of tanners land rover and they head out. Tanner drops them of at the safe house and leaves, however, once they arrive there an assasin springs out of no where. Bond recognises him as greccos bodyguard, rodriguez. Bond is able to kill him after a lenghty fist fight, but white says he is not safe and quantum and the risican soldiers will soon have him killed. Bond says he will take white somewhere secure and they run. Suddenly, soldiers appear and start firing but a jeep pulls up, driven by lotta bootay. Bond and white jump in, then bond grabs a bazooka from the back seat and uses it to kill the soldiers as they speed up. Bond asks lotta why she is back here and lotta says mi6 said bond would need back up. Bond gives lotta directions to the freedom fighter base.
Once they arrive at the base bond speaks to shakira about the situation. Shakira tells bond to kill white now, because he was the quantum agent seen with the briefcase. Lotta and white both pull out guns and start killing freedom fighters who are completely unprepared for attack, then soldiers crash in and help in the slaughter. Bond and shakira attempt to fight back but are shot with tranquiliser darts. The soldiers, along with lotta and white, hand cuff bond and shakira, strip them of thier guns and bundle them into a jeep. They then set explosives and quickly leave the temple as it blows up and caves in behind them.
Bond and shakira wake up and are bundled out. They are in the jungle, at a large mansion on a hill, which is extremely well defended. They are greeted at the door by white, lotta, and general grecco. He seems very pleased while shakira looks slightly scared and bond pissed of. Grecco guestures to come in, and he shows them around. Grecco takes them outdside to a large patio area, where Grecco sits them down at a table, he asks bond if he wants a drink, bond spits at him. Grecco laughs and says it does not matter, because thanks to lotta bond will not live much longer. Lotta reveals herself as a double agent, she was being tracked by the risicans when she rescued bond and led the soldiers to the freedom fighter hideout. Lotta says why should she work for mi6 when with the risican secret service she gets more money, and she gets to live in paradise. Bond says that once mi6 realise he is missing then they will come and find him, and that grecco will never be able to fire the satellite. Grecco laughs and reveals that he does not plan to fire it from the island, or from any other place on earth for that matter, so even if by some miracle the british do attack, astranauts will already be on the satellite with the warheads grecco has stored, while grecco will be onboard the massive osprey bond saw at the base, with the control device. The british and the americans will not dare blow up the satellite or the osprey though, because if they do, then grecco will destroy washington and london. He will pretend that he will leave the satellite alone if risico is left alone from US and UK troops, and that if he gets all the nuclear weapons the allied forces have stored. But straight after he has got his demands he will destroy washington and london anyway, then using the weapons given to him, take control of other countries. He says that soon, risico will be the most powerful nation in the world. As he is talking, bond is picking the lock on his cuffs using the lock pick Q stored in his watch.
Grecco says its time bond and shakira dies now and takes them inside to his private aquarium. Grecco, white and lotta stand in a control room over looking the aquarium protected by bullet proof glass. He tells bond that there are water tunnels all over the island which he sometimes opens and sometimes closes so his pets can go anywhere around the island. He then asks bond if he knows much about sharks as 3 great whites swim past. He says the great white is not normally a man eater, nore is it normally held in captivity, however, they are attracted to blood and he does not care how uncomfortable they are. He turns to shakira who looks paralysed with fear. Grecco laughs as he knows that shakira has a fear of sharks, he says that he plans now for her to die the same way her mother did. Lotta comes out and slashes her arms with a machette as bond desperatly tires to finish picking the lock. He shouts at lotta to let her go but a soldier hits him. Grecco tells bond he will see her soon and lotta throws shakira into the tank, as the sharks brutally kill her. Just then bond finishes picking the lock, but pretends he is still restrained. He says that they shouldnt have done that as the guards lead him to the top of the tank. Grecco says goodbye mr bond, lotta laughs and says that james was never any good, and that she- just then she is cut of because bond hits one guard and throws the other into the tank. Lotta flees desperatly into the control room while shooting at bond, as bond grabs a guards machine gun. Grecco sounds the alarm, bond runs up and sprays bullets at the control room, but grecco reminds him the glass is bullet proof. Bond heres soldiers coming and runs.
Bond runs back to the patio, dodging gunfire he jumps the railing and rolls down the small hill. Landing in the jungle, he knocks a guard of his quadbike and drives of. He is pursued by soldiers but shakes them of by flying of a small cliff, bond then jumps of the bike in mid air and lands in the river, bond hijacks a patrolling soldiers boat, the heads of into the cover of the jungle.
cut to MI6HQ. M is talking to the priminister, the head of the CIA and the president. M says they have lost all contact with bond just as he was onto something and she demands that they launch an attack on risico before something big happens. The priminister agrees but the president and head of CIA are reluctant, that is until felix lieter bursts in and reveals data bond managed to text him shortly before his kidnapping. The data contains photos of the nuclear warheads bond took at the facility. Felix also reveals that he himself found imcriminating data about risicos new space program. The president and head of CIA decide to launch the attack, the SAS and US marines are called. Meanwhile, in risico, grecco, lotta and mr white are now at the military base where the shuttles are being kept. White warns grecco that if bond is still alive then trouble could be ahead, so the general orders troops to find bond or face execution. Bond meanwhile is still speeding along the river, he eventually reaches his destination, the risico airport. right then, he spots the shuttles taking of in the distance. knowing he is short on time, he jumps out and hijacks a helicopter, then flies it to the base. landing, he jumps out and starts to fight the guards. He spots lotta and chases her to the roof of one of the buildings. She turns around and starts to talk but bond brutally shoots her and she falls of the building, with bond showing no remorse. he then picks up her radio which she dropped, grecco angrily screams through his radio "lotta, where are you, bond is here, we need to leave now". bond replies, saying "grecco, bond here. if i were you i'd make your move soon, *looks at dead body on the ground below* shes really fallen for you". bond throws down the radio and runs.
Meanwhile, grecco and mr white are boarding an enourmous osprey kind of veichle. Grecco tells white that this is the equivalent of a military base in the sky and that they will be safe from any attack onboard here. Just then, SAS troops and marines attack the island, storming towns and jungles. Fleets of helicopters descend as the risicans go to war with the attacking forces. Grecco and white quickly run onboard the osprey and it takes of, as it does, it shoots down 3 SAS helicopters with its built in missiles. Bond sees the massive machine take of and quickly runs back to his helicopter, but the osprey destroys it with a blast of its rockets. Bond then spots greccos jetpack. He uses it to fly up and jump onboard the osprey. Inside, not many soldiers have noticed him so he sneakily takes most of them out. He then bursts into the main pilots cabin just as grecco is making his demands to the UK and america via a webcam. Grecco holds up the control device then warns bond that if he fires one shot he will activate the warheads. Bond drops his gun and leans back, pulling the emergency exit cord. a door shoots open and wind gushes in. Bond then grabs his gun and shoots the device, causing it to explode in greccos hands. Mr white makes a grab for bonds gun and they begin to fight as grecco sprints out of the pilots cabin towards the back. the pilot is trying to keep control of the osprey as bond and white fight and a shot hits the controls. a soldier who was operating the built in weapons attempts to help white but bond kicks him out of the osprey. bond and white end up on the outside but bond swings back in, just as he is about to fall bond grabs his hand. White asks if bond is saving him, bond says no, he just wanted to see his face before he died. Bond lets go and white goes flying of.
bond goes after grecco, running to the back of the osprey where there are several helicopters. The pilot has completely lost control and the osprey is going to crash soon. Grecco tells bond he will be back and gets in the chopper as the back of the osprey flies open. Grecco then reveals that he has set explosives on the osprey for emergencies and pulls out a detonator, pressing the button then flying of in the chopper as the top half of the osprey explodes. Bond grabs a parachute and jumps just as the whole osprey is engulfed in a fireball.
Back in risico days later, bond is standing on the roof of the risico tower, thinking. M aproaches and tells bond he wasnt to blame for shakiras death. Bond says he knows, but it doesnt mean he shouldnt be upset. M says that its all over now, but bond disagrees, saying he wants grecco dead. M says he was last seen headed to athens, bond says he will see him there, and leaves......
JAMES BOND WILL RETURN, IN BLOODSTONE
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but then I was told to 'circulate' after a brawl with one of the office-girls;-and she said(M); Either You pack and move to our Austrian Station or You pack off entirely..;
not much to do but follow orders as given.
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SKYFALL is about, the rest of my story; bearded , that is-as the beholder liked my scarry face on location, they decided to introduce it to the story; aswell as my presence in the Canary Wharf complex some years ago..(it was not the Spa of Your Thought's!)..
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